📝 Many fixes courtesy of @soulshake

slides/k8s/bento-intro.md

@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ INFO Pipeline has terminated. Shutting down the service  @service=bento
 ```
 ]
 
-The pipeline should complete in a just a few seconds.
+The pipeline should complete in just a few seconds.
 
 ---
 
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ Option 2: [read the docs][output-http-server]
 
 ---
 
-## 🙋 Choose your adventure
+## 🙋 Choose your own adventure
 
 Do you want to try to write that configuration?
 
@@ -329,7 +329,7 @@ It's also possible to batch, stream...
 
 ## Trying it out
 
-- Run Bento with that configuration:
+- Run Bento with this configuration:
   ```bash
   bento --config redis2http.yaml &
   ```
@@ -395,7 +395,7 @@ We get a JSON payload, and we want to use the `response` field.
 
 ## Configure an enrichment workflow
 
-The [documentation][enrichment] is really good!
+The [Bento documentation][enrichment] is really good!
 
 We need to set up:
 
@@ -519,11 +519,11 @@ flowchart LR
   result_map --> OUT
 </pre>
 
-- The `branch` processor allows to do the processing "on the side"
+- The `branch` processor allows doing the processing "on the side"
 
 - `request_map` and `result_map` transform the message before/after processing
 
-- Then, the result if combined with the original message (the `city`)
+- Then, the result is combined with the original message (the `city`)
 
 ---
 
@@ -572,7 +572,7 @@ Post "http://ollama...": context deadline exceeded
 
 ---
 
-## 🙋 Choose your adventure
+## 🙋 Choose your own adventure
 
 How should we address errors?
 

slides/k8s/handson-mlops.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ Misattributed to Benjamin Franklin
 
 - If you are attending a live workshop:
 
-  - follow along the demos, ask questions at any time
+  - follow along with the demos, ask questions at any time
 
   - if you can, try to run some of the examples and demos in your environment
 
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ class: in-person, pic
 
 - Your lab environments will be available for the duration of the workshop
 
-  (check with your instructor to know exactly when they'll be shutdown)
+  (check with your instructor to know exactly when they'll be shut down)
 
 - Note that for budget reasons¹, your environment will be fairly modest
 

slides/k8s/ingress-tls.md

@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ class: extra-details
 
 ---
 
-## Choose your adventure!
+## Choose your own adventure!
 
 - We present 3 methods to obtain a certificate
 

slides/k8s/ollama-intro.md

@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ Assuming Ollama is installed and running:
 ollama run qwen2:1.5b "What's the solution to global warming?"
 ```
 
-We're going to use that model because it's relatively small.
+We're going to use this model because it's relatively small.
 
 Many others are available (see https://ollama.dev/search).
 
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ kubectl wait pod ollama --for=condition=Ready
 (If that command times out, try again and/or specify a higher timeout.)
 
 ```bash
-kubectl exec ollama -- ollama run qwen2:1.5b "What's Bach best piece?"
+kubectl exec ollama -- ollama run qwen2:1.5b "What's Bach's best piece?"
 ```
 
 Shutdown the pod:
@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ kubectl run httpclient --rm -it --image alpine/httpie -- --ignore-stdin \
 
 ## Potential solutions
 
-- Bake the model in the image
+- Bake the model into the image
 
   🙅 Personal opinion: this is a bad idea (image size, maintenance...)
 
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ kubectl run httpclient --rm -it --image alpine/httpie -- --ignore-stdin \
 
 ---
 
-## 🙋 Choose your adventure
+## 🙋 Choose your own adventure
 
 Should we add that lifecycle hook?
 
@@ -276,6 +276,28 @@ There should be two processes:
 
 ---
 
+class: extra-details
+
+## HTTPie
+
+https://httpie.io/
+
+- CLI client to send requests to web services
+
+- Similar to curl, but made specifically to talk to API backends
+
+```bash
+httpie <URL> [key=value] [key=value] [key:=value]
+```
+
+- The `key=value` pairs get turned into a JSON object
+
+- `key:=value` indicates a parameter to be sent "as-is"
+
+  (ideal for e.g. boolean or numbers)
+
+---
+
 ## Sending some load
 
 We're going to use `hey`:

slides/k8s/ollama-metrics.md

@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ class: extra-details
 
 - By default, the Prometheus Operator will only look at \*Monitors with the right labels
 
-- Our extra options mean "use all the Monitors that you will find!"
+- Our extra options mean "use all the Monitors that you find!"
 
 ---
 
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ Get the public address of one of our nodes:
 kubectl get nodes -o wide
 ```
 
-Connect to the public address of a node, on the node port.
+In a browser, connect to the public address of any node, on the node port.
 
 The default login and password are `admin` / `prom-operator`.
 
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ Select a namespace and see the CPU and RAM usage for the pods in that namespace.
 
 ---
 
-## 🙋 Choose your adventure
+## 🙋 Choose your own adventure
 
 Do we want to...
 
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ Do we want to...
 
   (for HAProxy metrics, you can use [Grafana dashboard 12693, HAProxy 2 Full][grafana-12693])
 
-- If you don't want to write the manifests, you can use [these ones][ollama-yaml]
+- If you don't want to write the manifests, you can use [these][ollama-yaml]
 
 [grafana-12693]: https://grafana.com/grafana/dashboards/12693-haproxy-2-full/
 [ollama-yaml]: https://github.com/jpetazzo/beyond-load-balancers/tree/main/ollama
@@ -268,6 +268,6 @@ class: extra-details
 
 - This is because our node is oversubscribed
 
-- This is because we didn't specify of resource requests/limits (yet)
+- This is because we haven't specified resource requests/limits (yet)
 
   (we'll do that later!)

slides/k8s/resource-limits.md

@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ class: extra-details
 
   - use [static CPU manager policy](https://kubernetes.io/docs/tasks/administer-cluster/cpu-management-policies/#static-policy)
 
-For more details, check [this blog post](https://erickhun.com/posts/kubernetes-faster-services-no-cpu-limits/) or these ones ([part 1](https://engineering.indeedblog.com/blog/2019/12/unthrottled-fixing-cpu-limits-in-the-cloud/), [part 2](https://engineering.indeedblog.com/blog/2019/12/cpu-throttling-regression-fix/)).
+For more details, check [this blog post](https://erickhun.com/posts/kubernetes-faster-services-no-cpu-limits/) or these: ([part 1](https://engineering.indeedblog.com/blog/2019/12/unthrottled-fixing-cpu-limits-in-the-cloud/), [part 2](https://engineering.indeedblog.com/blog/2019/12/cpu-throttling-regression-fix/)).
 
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slides/shared/about-slides.md

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
 
   (let's say we'll keep them online at least 1 year, how about that?)
 
-- You can download the slides using that URL:
+- You can download the slides using this URL:
 
   @@ZIP@@